Wednesday, 12 November 2014

You warned me!

 Glaring around, mum warns me to be careful I don't listen and carry on as the springs stretch and the mat bounces me higher and higher I go flying into the air I was like an helicopter taking of.


I landed with a thud my ankle done a 360 my eyes turned  into a waterfall and as my mouth was on full blast the pain slowly goes into a  black hole.


getting back inside with tear's in my eyes, mum said" I was watching you I told you will get hurt I said" sorry mum I will try to listen to you next time well I will listen to you next time.                   






2 comments:

  1. Amazing story rico I love the despription. Well done you have improved in writing a lot. Awesome job. Bravo!!!!!
    From madaline.

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